Wednesday, October 20, 2010

Mag 37




In the late afternoon sun,
I am like the crumpled sheets in our bed,
Ready to be made.

The luminescent light that reflects
from your bronze eyes
bares down on my soul.

Sometimes it's hard not to look away.



......Inspired by Magpie Tales

 

 

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12 comments:

  1. kathi harrisOctober 20, 2010 at 11:41 AM

    Yes, smtimes gazes can b overpowering.

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  2. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallOctober 20, 2010 at 11:59 AM

    true words.
    lovely put.

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  3. UnknownOctober 20, 2010 at 6:17 PM

    wonderful imagery...captivated by light

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  4. ReflectionsOctober 20, 2010 at 8:49 PM

    Beautifully expressed pull of the gaze of ones love.

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  5. Kathe W.October 21, 2010 at 9:20 AM

    lovely poem

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  6. Kristen HaskellOctober 21, 2010 at 6:05 PM

    That is incredibly sensual. Beautiful Magpie!

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  7. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallOctober 22, 2010 at 6:30 AM

    hard not to look away,
    agree,
    beautiful imagery,
    well put.

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  8. AnonymousOctober 22, 2010 at 7:07 AM

    Nice Mag. Love and Light, Sender

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  9. Brian MillerOctober 23, 2010 at 3:42 AM

    then dont look away...playful verse...

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  10. OliviaOctober 24, 2010 at 3:04 AM

    mesmerizing..!! xx

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  11. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallNovember 2, 2010 at 6:17 PM

    Jingle Poetry Monday Potluck is open Now,
    http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/10/poetry-potluck-halloween.html

    Welcome Linking in any poem, join the fun today!

    an old poem would work.

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  12. JingleNovember 4, 2010 at 11:35 AM

    http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/11/03/thursday-poets-rally-week-32-november-4-10/
    you are represented as fresh poets to explore at our Poets Rally week 32.
    I invite you to become a participant, which helps you get poetry awards upon making a minimum 18 comments to participants.
    Thanks for the considerations. Link in a poem via commenting under the post when you are ready.
    Happy Thursday!
    xxx

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