Wednesday, October 20, 2010

Mag 37




In the late afternoon sun,
I am like the crumpled sheets in our bed,
Ready to be made.

The luminescent light that reflects
from your bronze eyes
bares down on my soul.

Sometimes it's hard not to look away.



......Inspired by Magpie Tales

 

 

12 comments:

  1. Yes, smtimes gazes can b overpowering.

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  2. Beautifully expressed pull of the gaze of ones love.

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  3. That is incredibly sensual. Beautiful Magpie!

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  4. hard not to look away,
    agree,
    beautiful imagery,
    well put.

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  5. then dont look away...playful verse...

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